Apple meets Orange.
Apple BLUSHES.
Close-up View on Apple. Increase in apple redness.
Candlelight date.
Photo taken with Apple closer to lens as Apple is the main character. Need to have an equal balance between candle and the two fruits so that the attention will still be on the two fruits. Candlelight meant to provide ambiance only.
Kiss scene between Apple and Orange.
Candle is not the focus anymore but having it peeping over the fruits creates a "drama-kiss" effect. Portrait shot points towards the two fruits at the end. Viewer should be able to focus on the kiss easily.
Apple 2 APPEARS! Competition for orange's love begins.
Critique: Apples look alike. Some viewers thought apple and orange had a baby which is an orange.
Solution: CHANGE THE THIRD PARTY.
Newcomer Apple manages to win Orange's heart. Original Apple is replaced and feels jealous.
Close-Up view of Original Apple with the new couple in the background. Original Apple is given a green hue to show jealousy.
Critique: Confusion of which apple is which starts here. Same solution.
Orange disappears. Two apples looking at a certain direction.
Black-out on one side of the picture to show directionality.
Tilting (Dutch angle) attempted to show a sign of horror/fear.
Critique: People couldn't understand why the sudden change in number of fruits. Broken link in storyline.
Solution: Show a hand picking up the Orange and the other two fruits watching Orange being taken away. Directs the storyline to a natural ending with Orange being eaten.
Orange was eaten. Two apples watch their ex-lover from a distance.
Close-up view of orange slices on plate with apples blurred in the distance.
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