Hello all fellow NM2208 tutorial/module mates! :)
Fortunately, and unfortunately, I did not present today during tutorial due to a lack of time. However, it would be great if you guys can comment on whether my sketches are fine!
Stuff that I think I should improve on after going through today's critique session:
1. Noise - Too much detail will bring the audience attention away from the alphabet itself
Things to change for my final prototype: in Concept 1, my hamsters may increase "noise" and make the audience focus on the activity of the hamster itself and not what alphabet the hamster forms.
2. Alignment - Letters should be positioned at the same level in order to enhance easy identification
Things to change: I'm not sure if my concepts have any major errors for this point...
Alright! I don't know what to do with my hamsters honestly speaking. Hopefully I can get some suggestions? :)
THANK YOU VERY MUCH, in advance!
<3
All the best for your A1 as well :)
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